Monday, November 17, 2014

Monday, November 27- FOUND Poem

                                                  HOME

                                                How will I get out?
                                              How will I get home?
                                                   I have no way
                                                   I have a plan
                                                I'm coming home
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2 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 20, 2014 at 7:24 AM

    I like that this started as a "How will I?" and turned into an "I will." If the words allow, I would make it a little longer next time. Great Job!

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  2. UnknownNovember 20, 2014 at 8:52 AM

    Nice, but brief. I agree with Kaitlyn, if the words, allow make your poem longer. It will give the reader more to sink their teeth into.

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